Willow
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Post by Willow on Sept 10, 2006 21:46:41 GMT -5
Weeping WillowWeeping, I bend But do not break As firmly, my roots Grasp the bloodied ground Gently, my limbs Enfold and embrace you As weakly, you stumble And fall with no sound Softly, I cleanse And heal your wounds As lightly, my leaves Caress your brow Safely, you sleep Beside my cool stream As longingly, I whisper “Stay with me now” Dreaming, you speak Of battle and bloodshed For duty, and honor Are all that you know Waking, you struggle Within my strong branches As slowly, my limbs Allow you to go Sadly, I sing A song of farewell While dying a little With each step you take Firmly, my roots Grasp the bloodied ground As weeping, I bend And finally break
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Post by granite on Sept 14, 2006 10:43:32 GMT -5
that picture is kinda ... weird ... too much skill with photoshopping is scary but the poetry is good
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Glaze
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Post by Glaze on Sept 18, 2006 0:12:35 GMT -5
Willow, you got some skills on your hands, not only in the poetry but with the art also. You guys are so entertaining and that is the reason why I would not trade CoN for anything else.
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Willow
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Post by Willow on Sept 18, 2006 12:38:02 GMT -5
Thank you Glaze We truly are a CoN-glomerate of people, all with something to contribute, and if we support and nurture each other, it will make us that much stronger. And thank you Granite, glad you liked the poem anyway, lol. The photo weirdness was Paint Shop Pro, btw. Not too much skill, but too little maybe? Constructive criticism is always good too
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Post by demaris on Sept 18, 2006 14:34:43 GMT -5
Nice! I am in awe.
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Post by Soluna on Sept 21, 2006 22:02:30 GMT -5
Oh yes very lovely!
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itar
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"If the tank isnt happy, your just plain screwed"
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Post by itar on Sept 22, 2006 7:41:29 GMT -5
Clever Poem Willow ! And dont worry about photoshop you did just fine
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Willow
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Post by Willow on Sept 22, 2006 18:28:43 GMT -5
Thank you for the kind words Demaris, Soluna, Itar. (it wasn't photoshop, it was paint shop pro, and I'm clearly no expert....maybe I should get photoshop instead)
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filch
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Post by filch on Sept 27, 2006 23:24:09 GMT -5
Willow
When I invented Paint Shop I had just in mind someone with your glorious skills would be using it!
I wish I could take credit for inventing such verse as well..but alas, the credit is all yours!
I remain, The Great and Powerful Filchini.
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